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7 okt 2011 - 21:59

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Let us be a honeybee

07-10-2011


I wish the world was peaceful
And as shiny as a ray
That we could be a honeybee
And fly our days away
The earth was full of flowers
And how few was our pain
Every kind would have the mind
To let the love remain.
I wish upon the starry skies
And everything that's true
To never let the plain regret
Rule everything you do
It was exactly what you wanted
Though you won't do it again
You were in the dark, but embrace this spark
And let his warmth make you a man


Reacties:

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JeRiNo
JeRiNo zei op 3 nov 2011 - 17:00:
Het mogen dan maar 82 woorden zijn, maar die 82 woorden vormen samen een nieuw kunstwerkje
Prachtig!

xxxx


realMe
realMe zei op 9 okt 2011 - 11:04:
dat was echt prachtig
echt heel mooi


dobbyenwinky
dobbyenwinky zei op 8 okt 2011 - 17:05:
Kort maar krachtig... en heel mooi!


Snullie
Snullie zei op 8 okt 2011 - 7:00:
Echt heel mooi! (:


Teysz
Teysz zei op 8 okt 2011 - 0:12:
Mooi gedicht!